Complaint Review: Temple University - Philadelphia Pennsylvania

Communication is paramount! Trying to understand one’s perspective should supersede their grammar, spelling, etc.  He is obviously stressed and may not have taken the time to proof read his comment. Does poor grammar really devalue ones claim of injustice for lack of provided services.? The answer is no! The education system is this country runs on capital first and its integrity falls far below the that.  If you buy a vehicle for the price of a semesters tuition and that vehicle breaks down, the avenues of correcting the problem are fairly clear. Fighting a university for its poor service is not as clear.  

Anyone who has a much stronger grounding in one subject or area of study can pick another apart. Making comments about grammar but no relevant comments about the main subject is counterproductive.  It does make you appear to be a bully with words or childlike.

I have taken quite a few English course, my speech are fine, logic/ reasoning are fine, but improving the writing grammar is very odd to me and I always used the tutoring center intensely and questing him. I don't know how many people adapted to culture but I have never adapted to any culture whatsoever. I appreciate both your concern for my writing, and have taken a little thought what is this world coming, the lack of care for the common people or is it for the minority? I could have ignored this grievance issue, and let victims like myself die, but my stubbornness have led me to share these issues and ideas with the public. You all know unemployment rate are increasing, propaganda are being produced by the media constantly, the constitution is being trashed, and what else can anyone do, but to go on living in the repetitive way, neither free nor happy. I majored in philosophy not the purpose of getting a job, I abandon that route of security, but instead for the search for freedom and intelligence, and ask myself what is this all about, mostly in the philosophy forums. They also share the same views like yourself, my grammar is poor, nevertheless they see me someone who is different. Thank you for reading, if there is any more responses I don't mind replying.

all I have to go on, Daniel, is what you wrote. This was beyond misspelling. Verb forms were mixed, sentance structure was awkward. I had to struggle to understand what you were trying to say. Regardless of the subject you study, you have to know the language to convey your thoughts. What good is your knowledge if you can not express that knowledge to others by the written and spoken word? Clear writting shows clear thinking. The comments I read judged you on performance, nothing else. I urge you to first lean the value of clear communication, then learn the skill. As for you people who also made comments on woeful lack of basic language skills, I am encouraged by your comments. I think you, me, and a dozen other people in this country are concerned with what is happening to our wonderful English language.

You STILL need to write and speak well, if you are going to get any kind of a job, especially being a college grad. WE could NOT follow your reasoning since your grammar was so bad. IF you were to apply for a job and simmited a cover letter using the grammar skills that you have , they would throw your resume in the garbage. Maybe you can take another English class so that you can better express your thoughts because if people can not figure out what you are trying to say, they will not listen. First impressions are everything and your grammar is NOT giving off a very good first impression. Think about it.

I admit I do have a writing problem, but I do not have a problem with my reasoning. Its my 5th year and this class happens not to be an English class, but a class of economics in the 4th year . I'm a philosophy major, and I hope it would improve my writing level. I am dishearten by both your comments, I guess pop culture has led people to judge only through appearance only. Surely enough my reasoning are not obstructed only my sentences, and given you have intelligence, I assume you have the sense of it. Should a man be condemned if he can't spell? Be modest what you have to say, and don't be quick on your judgment, don't rant like those ill-teenagers or stereotypes who only knows how to bully and criticized, they only want to impress what they have or know, they know not how to be humble.

I admit I do have a writing problem, but I do not have a problem with my reasoning. Its my 5th year and this class happens not to be an English class, but a class of economics in the 4th year . I'm a philosophy major, and I hope it would improve my writing level. I am dishearten by both your comments, I guess pop culture has led people to judge only through appearance only. Surely enough my reasoning are not obstructed only my sentences, and given you have intelligence, I assume you have the sense of it. Should a man be condemned if he can't spell? Be modest what you have to say, and don't be quick on your judgment, don't rant like those ill-teenagers or stereotypes who only knows how to bully and criticized, they only want to impress what they have or know, they know not how to be humble.

I admit I do have a writing problem, but I do not have a problem with my reasoning. Its my 5th year and this class happens not to be an English class, but a class of economics in the 4th year . I'm a philosophy major, and I hope it would improve my writing level. I am dishearten by both your comments, I guess pop culture has led people to judge only through appearance only. Surely enough my reasoning are not obstructed only my sentences, and given you have intelligence, I assume you have the sense of it. Should a man be condemned if he can't spell? Be modest what you have to say, and don't be quick on your judgment, don't rant like those ill-teenagers or stereotypes who only knows how to bully and criticized, they only want to impress what they have or know, they know not how to be humble.

You are a college student ????? I find that hard to believe. I am appalled at your grammar, spelling and syntax, which proves you are incapable of doing college level work. No wonder you received a D+ ! Your continued use of such poor examples as " he say " " who have given ", " I have follow ", are prime examples of your ignorance of the English language. ( And these are only from the FIRST paragraph ! The remaining paragraphs are just as bad ). If you desire to have a college education, you MUST be able to do college level work. At this point, you cannot. Go and take all of the remedial English courses you can find - THEN attempt this course again.

Judging by the report you wrote, you probably deserved that D+. Your grammar is awfull. MY 10 year old gramdson has a better grasp of English grammar than you do. Stop whinning and grow up and maybe take an English course. IF I unserstand your rantings, the professor said that he does not hold the hand of his students, etc. They ARE adults, after all. And he is right.